Trifextra Challenge: Lost at Sea

This challenge is hard and I’m a bit myopic.
I was hoping to dazzle you with my brilliance.
Instead I’m lost at sea, with only a basin to reach the shore of coherence.

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I’m participating in Trifecta’s Trifextra Challenge for this weekend:

Trifecta Writing Challenge

This weekend we’re asking you to add thirty of your own words to the following three words for a total of thirty-three:
myopic
dazzle
basin

You can check out others’ entries or submit your own at:

Trifextra: Week Ninety-Seven

Please feel free to share your own thirty words below.

13 Comments

  1. December 8, 2013 / 4:18 pm

    I like it. Very well said, or in other words, nicely written.

    • vernette
      Author
      December 8, 2013 / 4:21 pm

      Thank you kindly. I felt like I really bombed on this challenge tho.

  2. December 8, 2013 / 4:21 pm

    Hee! We all feel that way with one challenge or another. (For me, it was the most recent weekly challenge – “tush.”) Just keep paddling that basin…

    • vernette
      Author
      December 8, 2013 / 4:22 pm

      I will 😀 and thnak you.

  3. December 8, 2013 / 6:33 pm

    Lol,don’t we all feel like this-at least a newbie like me does feel so 😛 This is a great entry:-)

    • vernette
      Author
      December 8, 2013 / 6:34 pm

      lol thank you kindly! 😀

  4. December 8, 2013 / 8:37 pm

    Haha! This one was really difficult. Thanks for giving it a shot anyway! I liked your response.

    • vernette
      Author
      December 8, 2013 / 9:22 pm

      I tried 🙂

  5. Momo
    December 9, 2013 / 12:52 am

    to reach the shore of coherence…I love that line! Great take on a challenging prompt!

    • vernette
      Author
      December 9, 2013 / 12:53 am

      thank you so much 🙂

  6. December 9, 2013 / 9:06 am

    Man do I know that feeling, but I love your shore of coherence. Slippery, that.

    • vernette
      Author
      December 9, 2013 / 5:13 pm

      So true! 🙂

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